Review for Just Your Average Non-groupie [5]

Just Your Average Non-groupie [5]

(#) Armadillos_and_me 2007-02-24

I joined just for you!

This is a great story and i like how the characters are turning out. Maybe you could flesh them out them a bit more?
hohum anyways i really think you should make the chapters longer! Update soon!
(geez there where more exsclamation marks in that reveiw than i have ever done!damn it).

A.D aka Armadillos_and_Me

Author's response

ALI!!!! (I think) Hey, thanks for the review. I will try. Not sure how, but I will try. Long chapters are my enemey. I will do my best to conquer them.