Again, another chapter down, however I'm finding myself saying, are we there yet? It's coming to be the plot that never ended, and I'm wondering what the plot is. At one point it was the girl and her little boy, and now that that was done and over with it keeps going. I'm curious as to when Luna will reply, if at all. I'm curious as to whether it would even be a salvagable relationship that almost happened. This chapter was alot shorter than previous ones. I don't mean to be critical in my review but it was just a little disappointing.
Author's response
Thanks for the critical review. Had I avoided the Karina and Chico storyline, I would already be on the sequel. Still, I think it was important for the development of Harry as a character. This chapter was shorter, but mostly because I didn't wish to press on past Sanchez's death. This story ends in 4-6 chapters. I'll take a brief break from the bungleverse to finish Darkness and perhaps the Lie I live before starting the sequel. Sorry it may have seemed disappointing to you, but I consider it some of my finest work.~Jim