This chapter was so brilliant! (I just had to come by and review.) The fight was written so well. Usualy they're so hard to follow and it's most of the time over something stupid, but you made me really believe it! I wanted to punch Jane in the face myself. :)
Author's response
a new reader? yay! alright, so the fight was a little over-dramatic for my taste, but i wrote that a while ago and it's just something i felt i needed to add. thanks for appreciating it though.