lol!! omg i was laughing so hard!!! my friend working next to me was like, "wth!!! wat happend!!!" it was really hard for me to not explain it, cuz she's only on chpt 2 (she's Chase_the_Cat, if ud like to read her stuff...). So ya...but omg it was so great! well, i don't expect anything less than great after the amount of ur writing that i've read. man, its awesome! the only thing is that this chapter was a little difficult to read... just thought id let u know. it wasn't the writing, believe me! it was just the way it's formatted. so ya...maybe look into that? k, off to the next chapter! zoom!!!
Author's response
Wish you could read on the group site. Some of these web sites mess up the story on upload. I'll try to see what the problem is. I'm guessing you are on the chapter where Jamie and Caitlin sort of let it all hang out.
Take your time and enjoy. Once you catch up, you'll be waiting weeks for new chapters. Let your friend catch up to you and you can discuss the chapters.
Neil