Wow. When I read the summary I thought "This sounds like a pretty cool story." and as soon as i read the name simone, i knew you had wrote it! i love your writing! and you're very a creative author and I think that someday you could make it bigtime! You know, you have made me into a very hateful person, first Ryan, now William! Just kidding, but seriously, if i was mikey (even though i know its just a story) i would have had to kill william, even though simone told him not to. Your story is very realistic, and thats why i felt angry at william whilst reading that chapter. Love the story so-far, hope u post next chap soon!
Author's response
I'm glad that you're enjoying it.