(#) BenRG 2006-05-21
Well, that is an interesting concept, to say the least. I would probably have used the name 'Michael'. However, that has far too many religious connotations and probably would have earned you a few flames so, on the whole, I think you made the right choice.
So, we have a mystery being, apparently the last survivor of his universe (shades of Galactus in the Marvel comics universe). He has been trained by The Big One to save the universe and protect its native protectors. Not an entirely original concept but you still deserve a lot of credit for making work here.
Willow's little klutz attack at the end made me smile. It is really in character and I could see it happen in my head.
What's the bet that Adam wanted the Scoobies to follow him? I have no doubt that if he wanted to be undisturbed, they would have had no chance of finding his trail.
BenRG's Rating: 8/10