FicWad

This Snow White story was very good. I have only seen the Disney version first hand but have heard rumour of the gristly ending that eventually befalls the step-mother and to read it first hand is a powerful experience.

There is some disagreement in tense and some spelling errors. The first paragraph is confusing as it states the step-mother's intent to become queen before mentioning that Bora herself is a princess.

Thanks.