Very cute, I enjoyed it very much! Hmm... well, I agree that Haru calling Kyo "baby kitty" was sort of weird--usually he's just called "kitty," or "kitten"--but that's mostly because I don't think I've ever heard it before. I still think it's a cute nickname and I could get used to it quickly. ^_^
The writing was smooth and transitional, not jumpy and overly descriptive. You did quite a NICE JOB! I hope you update. I can’t wait to see what Haru was doing out there and why he was face down in the mud. 0.o