You know, it was weird, I was listening to "I'll Follow the Sun" by the Beatles when I was reading this. I really liked this story. I love stories invovling Sanzo and Goku. It flowed well, and it seemed in character. Well, it may have not been in character for Sanzo to break down like that, but I imagine that if he did break down, it would be a lot like that. So you did a good job.
Author's response
Thanks so much for the review! :D It was extremely hard to write this fic, because I had to think of how Sanzo would react in the situation I put him in, but I'm glad that you thought I did Sanzo-sama justice. Lol! :P Anyway, thanks again for the review! :)
~Lily~