Review for The Lost Fate

The Lost Fate

(#) Dark_Mage 2006-05-22

I was abit creeped by the use of drugs. I hate it when Harry becomes an addict of some sort. Anyway the chapter was well written but I just hope that he isn't a complete jerk, isn't a womaniser like guy and cuts back on the drugs. You could still make him really rebelious without them
Good writing though