What? WHAT?
Ok, I made the slight mistake of reading a couple of the reviews before I actually read the chapter, so I can't say I'm 100% shocked, but I am now extremely depressed. My only saving grace is that I know you are writing a sequel and I KNOW you will end that one happy... right? Well, you better...
Patrick really needs to stop worrying so much, sheish. Anyway, I loved it as always. You better start this next story soon, dearie! (Wow, I'm being extremely demanding and threatning... totally not in my character, lol) A point to you!