Review for The Broken Hollow

The Broken Hollow

(#) MandelisChaos 2007-03-04

I just loved the way you wrote this story, though it does pass by very quickly at times. I loved it and I do agree that it could be chaptered and sectioned off and maybee added to a little in parts where there are gaps in the content, but other than that it's a great story and very origonal.