First of all, wonderful chapter, as per usual from me. I really enjoy reading your stories.
Another thing. Now, this was barely noticeable, but I guess I know a lot about drugs (I don't do them, mind you..), but when you were listing off the date rape drugs, you put GBH instead of GHB. Also, I think in one of your previous chapters, you mentioned Sara tried to put a pill in Mikey's mouth. You spelled it "eccy", which I'm assuming, you meant Ecstasy. No harm, just something to watch out for.
But other than that, your content is marvelous. Just a few little errors :) Update soooooooooon. :)
Author's response
runs off to change it oops!, that was a mistake! But seriously, thank you for telling me it's very good of you. I changed it cos that's what it was supposed to say :). Yeah, i meant ecstasy, eccy's just slang (that may just be in Glasgow though? shrugs):) Once again, thank you; that was an incredibly helpful review! hugs