Awww... poor Emily. Well written. I like.
The only thing is... in some of these past chaps, there have been places where you tried to break a paragraph and there's a sorta ">BR>" thing or something. Just something I noticed. ^_^
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thing is html coding which I use for putting the chapter on my group. Sometimes some of the coding gets messed up on fan sites. The best place to read the chapters is on the group, but in your case that isn't possible.Neil