OK, now that I have (somewhat) composed myself...that was...orgasmic? Seriously. I love you. And your writing. Belle is such a mess, it's beautiful. Patrick and Elyse...hmmm, they are confusing. He loves Greta, with good reason, but Elyse might give her a run for her money. I'm so glad you haven't given up on this story. Your writing is too amazing for you to quit. Besides, it would be a shame if we didn't get an ending. Kyle just might havta smack a bitch...that was nerdy. Enjoy your point, it may be a while until you get another from me.
Author's response
orgasmic? hahaha...i love you, god-kyle.
my main objective with this chapter was to show the demise of her...she's tearing herself up. and she's constantly going through these waves of self-destruction, and sometimes she finds absolution, but for the better part of it she's just naturally the kind of person who defines "my own worst enemy".
i love elyse. that's pretty much the only reason she's in this story. she's just such a bad-a, and i think she pulls a certain humor into the story. she's my comic relief.
the end is coming...because, heaven forbid, kyle hasta smack a bitch. that is still my favorite.