/you just had to pay attention to Dad's steady horizontal growth and Mom's face gradually losing the battle against time to figure out the correct chronology.
/ OMG, that was officially the best descriptive sentence I've read....END OF.
I loved this chapter, if had Wiggie in it, so I was a little freaked out but I'm dealing with it. Then there was Patrick and Sheena thing. That was awesome, authentic, realistic, romantic, moving and all this other bunch of stuff that I can't get out because I used all my good stuff in the journal.
xx
Great writer. Seriously.