"It was as though this was the last kiss we never had."
There was something really hot or sexy or something about this line. Nice.
JB is just a big hunka love. Forgave her a little quickly, but showing his other side by thumping Pete. I like him a lot.
And Pete? I jump between loving him and hating him. Mainly hating him from this update :-)
Superb as ever, definitley worth waiting for. Points, as ever my lady xx
Author's response
I love this review! It makes me feel like I am doing something right because I'm not liking this chapter so much. So thanks! And thanks for sticking with the lack of updates. I'm just a slacker.