Review for Potter's Resistance 1: Breaking Ties

Potter's Resistance 1: Breaking Ties

(#) Wolfric 2007-03-14

I like this story the plot is well fleshed out with realistic detail and things like the theory of magic and the steps involved in learning control of magic are well thought out. Your grammer and spelling are impressive to me for a non-native english speaker; I'm sure I couldn't do as well in any other tongue. I hope you will find the time and inspiration to continue your story through to its conclusion. Thanks W.