FicWad
Browse
Search
Help
Filter: 0
Filter
You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search.
Sign up to adjust the filter
Log in
Remember me
Log in
Register
Lost password
Review for
Eclipse's Thoughts
Eclipse's Thoughts
(
#
)
Snapped_Chopstick
2006-05-28
Please please make more paragraphs! I think if you plot out the direction of the story more you could do a lot better. Make paragraphs, expand more upon ideas, etc. I love the pairing! But please, try building up to things. :)