Was I the only person who found it inappropriate that Joe was dating a pole dancer? -> Oh, this was a classic.
The whole chapter just flowed and was highly amusing to read. :)
I loved the Jewish parts. Probably because I understand some since it's related to my mother tongue German.
Author's response
I'm glad you liked that line because it kind of made me laugh. And it is wrong that I'm the only person laughing at my own jokes :-(
Thank you, lady xx