Okay my mom was here so i couldn't write me actule review. Okay i like but i'm VEY curios of what's gonna happen to Jay and Theresa and you described a * scene very good there and no i'm not a big fan of it but latly my mind has wanted me to read something about that.Yes i'm soooo weird.But still your older then me and you have more words then i do and I don't think i'll be writing any * scenes anytime soon. Sorry for the fans of * scenes but i'm not that into it. i'll have many make out sessions though.Hehehehe i'm soo evil And I like change. Lol. I'M NUTS. Here i go again going on about my life so other people will end up completly ignoring me. WELL I GOT A LIFE PEOPLE. Okay that was rude. So ignore that please.Man i'm gonna write too much sooner or later.Okay so that was me Fire-Star so now 2 of my friends will be talking.
Fighter: Funny i'm not no virgen no more and i'm curios. Are you a virgen cause' descibed it how it happens. Oh i'm 18 and I lost my vigenity when I was 14. But I won't say no more cause' you all will freak out. All I will say is that it's a great story and i'll be keeping up to date on it as well when i'm with Fire-Star(Theresa599).
Fire: Hey I am only 17 and I am proud to be a virgen. Now I like the story and as well I will be keeping up to date on it and i think Fire-Star will have to get the other 3 over to read this. Sorry we have to cram this into one review but it's a long one at least.
Fire-Star: Okay enough of this. We are basically saying: KEEP ON WRITING YOU ROCK AT WRITING.
Fighter: Not to mention very good at describing.
Fire-Star: Okay.
All: Bye Bye now.
Author's response
Hey guys!!!! (",) lmao I think that that was one of the longest reviews I've ever recieved!!!! lol so thanks....... Don't be concerned about not being too interested in smut, Fire-Star, cuz trust me, u still have enough time before those naughty evil thoughts take over!!!! lmao besides makeout scenes can be great, and not as graphic as the real deal..... Hey Fighter, I'm 18 as well and to reply to ur question, I'm definately not innocent, but haven't quiet lost it yet.... so yeah (",) and Fire, that's totally cool that ur proud of ur virginity..... keep it up girl lol :) So to all you guys, thanks for one of the best reviews!!! (and for making it super long!!! lmfao I love 'em!!!) so the next story shuld be up sometime this week, but I can't promise anything!!!! Cheers for now guys love Honey