I thought the first half dozen chapters of this story were amazing. There was such a sense of humour and lightheartedness to it. It all seemed so normal. Then you brought 'them' into it. For two chapters i was midly confused, but went with it. As it developed I understood and really got in to it. I havent read anything like this before, I supposed most writers wouldnt be able to pull it off, it being so complex. I did really enjoy this, alot. So much that I'm still up at 11 reading it, though I have work at 6 in the morning!
Truly a great and touching story, with under lying morals that you got across to me before I read the epilouge!
Congrats!
Kellie x