Honestly, I was a little confused with the first... I started reading and was like 'OMG, crazy person here is proposing marriages to animals' but it actually went really well! You capture the essence of little kids superbly, and I was seriously impressed. I had to rate, and I'm glad there are more chapters to read! It all tied together so nicely!
Rating point to you, my dear.
Author's response
Yea, well heaven knows I'm still that little kid--I actually do fight with 5 year olds a lot about stuff like that...hah. Thank you, seriously impressed, woah. :] More chapters coming, as well as cliff hangers...DUN DUN DUN