Ahhh!!! I love it!
This is soooo good! Even though the kid kinda creeps me out. But I don't know, I'm just paranoid.
The first kiss was just priceless. I kind of love you for it. :)
Anyway, you're taking all my points, I swear... On to the next chapter!
Author's response
I love the kid, for some reason...not because I made him up but... I liked the kiss too. :)