whoa...
hey, careful with your spelling and stuff, you have great rhythm with your writing, sometimes it can be ruined for a reader if that's flawed by a huge spelling error, get someone to proof read or just re-read 2-3 times yourself before posting, that's what I do, and I still have 2-3 per chapter....rolls eyes
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Gah!! I try to do that but when i'm posting i'm just so freaking exhausted that somethings just go by unnoticed. and I have no one to proof-read it for me. Forget that english is not my first language? O.O