This can go eitehr way in my opinion, two chapters really isn't enough for me to know if i like it or not. I can tell you that i would like to read more as of right now though. I usually don't like stories where all of the characters are OC..i do like taht you have not made everyone's names similar to HP cannon characters..i hate stories that are set so far in teh future where everyones last name is potter or weasley or malfoy or zambini...it makes sense that many of these lines would have died out..