I REALLY like it so far! Oh yeah, and I know what went wrong on the last review, you must have posted it twice by accident or something (I did!) and I reviewed the other one.
Anyway, I like the story line so far (I don't know what you're gonna turn it into) and I really like your writing style. Oh, and it made me laugh when she jabbed herself in the eye! And when Gerard just popped up out of no where!
=D
Author's response
Haha thanks sooo much for your review, i was upset then i read this and it made me laugh!
I love your reviews!
Thanks hun!
Abra