Oh...I loved it. I once had a frenemy named Candice...what a BITCH!!! blinks This was great, though. I LOVED the way you did the dialouge. You're such a wonderful author, so descriptive and awesome. Like, normally while reading a story, I'll read the words. That's it. With you, I'm not reading. I'm watching. I'm watching a wonderful movie that has a plotline and no mistakes and is descriptive and vivid and awesome and just GREAT.
I loved this story, and I love you, your writing style, and your wonderful fics. And you know what? It makes me angry reading these piece-o-shit fics out there, clogging this site with shit when people could be reading something like THIS. YOU, and other wonderful authors like you, are the reasons that I continue to stay on this site. Or else I'd leave and find a new site to write on. But, enough with this rant.
Thank you for gracing us with your talent. Thank you for sharing. I LOVE YOU!!!!!
Author's response
Haha, "frenemy"...Anyway...oh my god, could you have said anything more amazing to me? Christ, girl, you knew where to hit hard. You have no idea how it frustrates me that I can't make scenes out of what I write, how I can't show people the EXACT facial expressions, the exact touches, and the exact surroundings, and when you said that you're watching my words rather than reading them, I was so touched, haha. Because that's what I was hoping for all along.
Bless your heart, however abnormal it may be