Shel, I printed this off lastnight and read it while I had a some time to myself, and I just want to say this:
This is what encourages me to keep writing. You said in the chapter what this story and I know, if you work as hard on all your chapters, you will have a faithful army of people who will be on your back wanting more every update.
Seriously, for the more mature of us on here, this is exactly what we need.
Your attention to detail was exquisite and I wasn't sure if I actually felt like Lindsey or I was just standing right beside her as an innocent bystander...
Incredible....I'm in awe.
Author's response
So I have to tell you that this by far is probably the best review I have ever received! Thank you a million times over. Since the idea of Lindsey came to me a few monthes back, I had a feeling this story would mean more to me than any other I've ever written. That's already proving to be true. I hope I can continue to impress you. : )