Yeah I'm with the other girls on this, I rated it as Ambience. What I loved about this chapter is how you described both Lindsey and Andy as feeling as though they weren't connecting with that day. I adore this in stories.
Again, you have an exceptional attention to detail and pelase don't let it wear off. I hae enjoyed every syllable of this so far and I'm greatly greatly greatly excited about what's in store.
I will be recommending this to my DoJ Hoes to read...
You may continue.....
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Author's response
Wow! compliments, rating points, and recommendations all in one review. I honestly can't stop smiling. The great response I'm getting to this story is in turn getting me just as excited to share it with you. Thank you, again. I don't think I can say it enough.