"But fate is instincts worst enemy. And the rain was drowning that morning in fate." That line is just perfect.
Another beautiful update. Everything just flows so well.
And you continue to throw in those little hints that just make this character so intriguing. Nice work.
This gets my rating xx
Author's response
That was one of my favorite lines also. It wasn't apart of the first two drafts of the chapter though. It was seriously added in just before I actually posted this chapter.
Thank you for paying such close attention to the detail. There's a lot I want you to know about Lindsey, about Andy, that would seem so cliche. At least, that's what it seems broken heart have vecome these days.
Thanks again for the rating. I love reading your reviews.