"Begging himself for an explanation, he concluded it was only because she was probably the only person he had ever met that seemed to be more complicated then Peter Wentz."
Yeah, that made me chuckle, but it was well written. Who am I kidding, this whole thing was yet again written with such style and flow. I feel as though I don't work hard enough on my own writing. You're raising the bar, my dear. Good job! Keep up the fabulous work.
Author's response
I love that everyone who quoted from this chapter managed to pick out my favorite parts. That made me chuckle too, if only being Peter's complexity constantly worries/infuriates me.
And about me raising the bar, I'm not so sure about that. Cloak and Dagger is still one of the best stories I've had the pleasure of reading on this site. Of all the boys, I think that I can write Peter, Joe, and Andy. But I cannot for the life of my write Patrick decently. I greatly aprreciate your compliments though.