Review for Hidden Maturity

Hidden Maturity

(#) andrewjameswilliams 2006-06-01

Nice story.

I could really see that conversation taking place and Robert has every reason to be proud of Virgil. How many parents after all have kids who have superpowers and who use them for something other than to satisfy there own desires.

Very good work for a first story. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.