Review for Demons Within Me

Demons Within Me

(#) Frimmy 2006-06-01

kills you

jeez. we already know atlanta likes him! oyish. he, just kidding. but seriously, could you have made it any more cliff-hanger-esque?

mou, nice. except for one thing. although they are very chummy chummy, i'd think that they wouldn't be best friends, but rather, Atlanta and Theresa. it makes more sense, and they do get along better, talk more, then let's say Archie and her. they could be really good friends, yes, but i wouldn't say best friends.

asides from that, loved it! keep writing!