BRILLIANT!!!! That was beautifully written. I definitely could see it!
"severally annoyed with the fact that he couldn't get 'Grillz' out of his fucking head" -SOOO FUNNY!
"The car is in the garage"- love this whole idea!
Why did Joe ask her to marry him? Weird, but okay... Patrick definitely deserved it. Maybe now he'll wake up and smell, er, Kate. lmao....
Author's response
it was supposed to be strange and out of nowhere, so the fact that your mentally going 'wtf?' makes me smile.
thank you so much for all your love.