I followed a link from your lj to here and this is a very good beginning. I'm going to be reading the other parts and I'm terrible at reviews so I'll probably leave inane and/or rambling remarks on each part which you can laugh over or ignore, as you wish.
I think it's a brilliant touch, both to have her Force-sensitivity increase around her pregnancy (hey, it even explains some of the limp-duck, teary-eyed routine in RotS, if her empathy was up) and it is entirely fitting that the one who is evil to her is not Sidious but Palpatine, who so thoroughly betrayed her. Brilliant.