I love how you show the awkwarness of this situation. You can almost feel the discomfort in the car.
And the lift button thing made me smirk. And Patrck's quotation made me laugh because I knew what it was and both things provided just a glint of comic relief.
Well done. Another great and intriguing update. Points for you, lady x
Author's response
Thank you for the rating and the review! I'm glad you noticed the hints of comic relief I threw in. I figured the awkwardness needed to be broken up at least a little. And what better way to do that than with Patrick quoting a movie.