Oh, I can honestly feel the tension...
You are very talented, I think you need to know. This story is amazing. I will definately be coming beck for more. ;)
(Again, sorry for the sucky review, I have company over that just won't leave... you know how that is...)
Author's response
Haha. It's not a sucky review at all. I'm really glad you like the story though. Your opinion is definitely one I appreciate greatly frankly because your stories are incredible!