Review for An average day: Breakfast, jog, Lunch, movies oh yeah and a battle with the god of time

An average day: Breakfast, jog, Lunch, movies oh yeah and a battle with the god of time

(#) Ace_Fan_12 2007-03-31

Heey lol that wasn't a crappy chapter! And Neil was right! For once!! Dum dum duuum! lol well anyways update soon! Oh ya and could you make ur chapter a bit longer? Cuz no offence but they're a little too short and they're ending too fast!:) Anyways awesome story!!

Author's response

Yeah, I wuzz thinking they were to short also, so yeah thanx for reveiwing and not being rude, not that anybody is! So thanx again