UPDATE!! UPDATE!!! UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!
No no no no! Please please please I will die if you don't update soon, try telling me I'm overeacting--you are barked-at meat, I know I'm blabbering and sounding more stupid with each word written, but that story just about knocked the wind out of me. This section is the nothing-but-praise but. Moving along to the constructive critism bit...
Just brushing by, there is nothing you could change, but even the best writer in the world will have a few faults. For example, I know this isn't a very good time, but you could drag a little more humour into it. And perhaps go into a little more detail about Tulias, and what he would have looked like to the gang. You're good at describing, so really paint a picture with the words! ~"The wolf was huge, larger than anything I had seen, adn its fur was think, shaggy, silky, and a deep gleaming amythest (Sp? amethyst?) colour, gleaming with wet even as blood (Was there blood? If he had been hit by the truck there would have been, and there was Archie's dribbling from its mouth) soaked into it. Its paws looked like buckets, gently padding over the ground, supporting its huge form..."~ Etc etc etc.
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!