Ah, don'tcha hate question markes based off that confusing little thing we call...
THE OPPOSITE GENDER.
Dun dun dun...
Fabulous update, m'Dear. Just a few things I can't get enough off:
-These CHARACTERS! Seriously, they're entirley original but after just a chapter you feel completley connected to them. n.n
-The relationships. Patrick and Jess seem like they would make a cute couple, and for once it seems like Pete is the 'nervous, trmebling, stuttering' one instead of Patrick. I love the twist.
-The plot. Action! (Not just suspenseful but Joe too ;]) The way it keeps in rhythym.
-The descriptions. You have a different perspective of things, which it entirley a good thing, by the way.
Yes this is a long review but truthfully, this is the best 'piece of shit' I've read in a long time. Officially my favorite story. n.n
~Sabbs