Well, you reviewed my Static Shock fanfic, so I'm reviewing yours. :)
Really interesting and insightful AU fic. Can't wait to see where it will go.
Also, in response to your first reviewer... you shouldn't change something in a fic just because someone says something like "I'd like it better if such-and-such..." I hate that kind of censorship, where someone tells you how your fic should be written because they don't like some detail in it. As the old saying goes, you can't please everyone. As for the swearing, I never even noticed it to begin with.