(#) facia 2007-04-03
Ooh, very detailed and developed. I liked the thought you put into how to handle pokemon. The rich kid getting a special pokemon is something I'm kind of tired of, but yours was pretty reasonable. The worry about not enough pokemon was a lot more cliche, though, and didn't make any sense. If the students are all students, the teachers would know how many were on the roster - plus, you said they were picked individually for each student. No way you could run out early like in a regular first pokemon/professor fanfic, so why would a student think so? But those are just two details, and the rest of this is incredibly thought out and very well paced.