Great chapter, as always. About your ghost raters, pay no attention to them; they probably have nothing better to do, so they amuse themselves nagging others. I mean, I would understand if some people didn't like this story, I'd even understand an OOC rating, but ratings such as Cliché, Mary Sue, Illiterate or Train Wreck are extremelly unfair to this story.
Keep up the good work, you're a great writter.
P.S. Even though your story appears on the summaries page with the rating of 4, I can't seem to rate it up, as it says it reached the maximum of 5. Weird.