HAH! I loved it yes I did! Please keep updating I really want to know what happens next. I loved the A/A fluff, and the funny Neil lines--beyond killer. Again, you are a talented writer and you must keep goin or my Auntie's Dobermann will come after you, scare you to death and then pouce on you and attempt to make friends. (Ahhh, down Wan Chai! Down girl!)
Author's response
I'm glad you did. Yes, I decided that Neil had been to mean in chapter three, and not part of the story enough... soo. HAHA! Thanks again for a wonderful compliment... about that dog though.... I shall repel his/her with my dogs fluffy cuteness, (Make friends with that!). (^-^)