Ok, first: The line that Andy won't eat anything with a shadow totally made me laugh out loud. That's funny stuff right there! Second: You are so good at painting a visual picture that I swear I get lost in your stories. And third: Patrick and Lola really need to be getting it on. How many times do I have to tell you this??? Honestly....sheesh.
Oh, well. Wonderfully written. Katy wasn't kidding when she said that this story is a reminder of what the DoJ is all about. You, my dear, are amazing!
Smooches and ratings are in store for you!!!
Author's response
Have I ever told you that your reviews make me smile? Like big time. They're always so sweet. You weren't named Nice Spice by accident. Lola and Patty will get around to "getting it on" eventually. Maybe. I don't know. I like dangling the idea around. Speaking of smooches and ratings, I think I'm waaaay behind on your new story. DoJ hugs!