Once again, I would like to say how insulted and disgusted I am that you'd think to portray the MCR band members in this way (you make them out to be insane fucks (I’ll use your sense of vulgar low language here)). I think that I’ve already made my point very clear in my various e-mails that I have sent to you however, I also wish to share my feelings on your story openly with my fellow Ficwad users in the hope that maybe now someone has had the courage to give an honest opinion toward your writing, people will begin to see how utterly horrifying your portrayal is and will speak up about it instead of giving you the undeserved praise I have come to see in the reviews this vicious story has received so far.
I also felt that if I left my comments purely to e-mail then you would easily ignore them, as you have done in the past.
-Jane Balcross.
Author's response
i wasn't ignoring your e-mails deliberately, i have a tempremental yahoo acount that doesn't always let me access my e-mails. I always appreciate constructive criticism from people but
I feel that you've just been insulting me. And i actually think that this review wasn't necessary
-making it public-although, you seem to think it was so there's nothing i can do about that now, except delete my story which i won't do because i have worked too hard on it and there are people who enjoy it. I'm sorry you are unable to see that my writing is not an attack on MCR but rather, the opposite; a sign of my respect and admiration for a band that have affected my life in a fantastic and positive way. I love MCR and wish them all the best. I want to you realise that, please. -Laura.