FicWad

I think it's a very interesting spiritual mix you're piecing together here--the more you show the more I want to see. I'm greedy, I love to see how people flesh out the religion of Spira.

Auron and Kinoc have a strange relationship. I think that much was proved here. I like how Auron likes knowing the answers to Kinoc's questions and feels the pride involved but pushes it away because it's not proper. Kinoc's anger is very easy to relate to, and gotten across very well. I don't know whether I think it's horrifying or amusing that Auron can't give the apple any other way than putting it in the shoe. It almost completely negates the effort he put into thinking about it. I liked seeing Auron through Kinoc's eyes here where it occured; it gave a really good contrast between Auron as he's seen and Auron as he is. Great work. :D