FicWad

Um...interesting, but kinda overboard too. It's hard to believe the world can be that dangerous if a six year old kid could survive fine on his own, or that Gary would know where Ash was, yet never tells anyone until a kid shows up and just asks twice, or that Ash would be able to live up there fine for years yet almost die from an attack right as Ayden gets there. Like I said, interesting, but it feels incomplete and inconsistent, like you should spend a bit more time on worldbuilding. It would also be nice to have a better idea of how the world fell apart than just that the rockets took over after Ash disappeared.