Review for Return to Grace

Return to Grace

(#) facia 2007-04-09

Um...like I said last time, kind of inconsistent. If Abominations only eat people and pokemon, if she's trying to save pokemon, killing them saves the pokemon they'll end up eating, and she's already starving them by removing food. I don't think it makes any sense she'd be trying to just tranquilize them, especially if it only works for sixty seconds (plus...if things are this dangerous, someone trying to live and let live would kinda...die, and fast). And no, that's not true. Lightning dissipates in open water. So what he's doing still makes sense, but what you wrote isn't accurate. He still would get shocked (and fish do get fried), just not as badly as directly.